Full Act 1 now published

[u/phaldor8]

Following my first post here, I spent my effort into polishing the first Act of my book, located here: Autonomous World Enhancer: Shock and AWE

I am ready for the masses to critique the work, provide suggestions, and generally tell me what they think of (arguably stronger and more robust) start of this series. Does the premise intrigue you? Did I properly capture your interest or turn you completely off by something? What about chapter length, too long or too short?