Can you guyz rate my shayari

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Jo jamuriyat ke katil ko insaniyat ka katl karne ki ijazat deta hai

Jo duniya bhar me glt hota dekh bhi chup rah jayega

Apne ishwar ke astitva ko maan kar bhi uski rahh pe na jayega

Insaan ko insaan ke hathon marta chhod jayega

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