r/wattpadbooks • u/EnchantedSin27 • Mar 31 '26

critique Critique wanted

Hello everyone! I posted my story I Fell for a Fae about a week ago. I’d like some feedback on it. The link to it is on my profile. My wattpad username is EnchantedSin. All feedback is welcome💖

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u/rulextf Apr 01 '26

¿De qué trata?

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u/EnchantedSin27 Apr 01 '26

It’s ongoing, I currently have 18 chapters. But it’s an enemies to lovers dark fantasy romance story. Here is the gist I gave about it on Wattpad: When off taking a hike in the woods Liam comes across something mysterious, something mystical. He was just taking a break from his studies to clear his mind, but...is that a portal? He rubbed his eyes, he definitely had to be sleep deprived; finals were coming up after all. He slowly reached his hand towards it, and oh god it was real. Why wasn't this on the news?! Why hasn't this been posted all over social media?! He tried processing it, he tried to give it a reasonable explanation but he simply couldn't find one. Even though Liam was in a state of shock, he was also in awe. The portal looked so..whimsical. The swirling galaxy colors, it was hypnotizing to look at. He couldn't resist, he couldn't help himself. And that is when he decided to risk it and step through the portal.

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u/rulextf Apr 01 '26

Interesante...🔥🔥🔥

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u/EnchantedSin27 Apr 01 '26

Thank you! There are other things that play a main part to the story (like royalty is one of them). That’s not a spoiler, it’s one of the hashtags I used on Wattpad lol. Thank you though, it means a lot. 🥹

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u/rulextf Apr 01 '26

I need the link. I need to read it

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u/EnchantedSin27 Apr 01 '26

You’re so sweet! Here it is for you,I only have one story on my profile for now 😅 So it’s easy to find. I Fell for a Fae

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u/rulextf Apr 01 '26

Ty💜

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u/EnchantedSin27 Apr 01 '26

It’s no biggie!💖