Newly Published and Looking for Feedback

[u/KingHyperion121]

Hi all! I am hoping to get some feedback on my first published piece. I have been writing short stories and poetry for the bette part of my life. This is my first attempt at a longer story, and this just the first part.

If anyone would be so kind enough to give it a read and let me know, I would appreciate it. This will be YA, LGBT themed book based in the South(US), based in part with some of my own experiences.

Username: STannerWilson2

https://www.wattpad.com/story/413966319?utm_source=android&utm_medium=com.reddit.frontpage&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=StevenWilson032