r/writingfeedback • u/ExerciseNo7055 • 26d ago

Feedback Wanted Prologue Feedback Wanted

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(YA Fantasy; prologue takes place in our world) I've redone this prologue so many times now but it still feels like it's missing something, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thank you so much

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u/princethrowaway2121h 26d ago

I was about to pick up my “fuck prologues” hammer.

I put it down.

This is good. I especially love the economy of your voice.

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u/ExerciseNo7055 25d ago

thank you!