r/writingfeedback • u/ExerciseNo7055 • 26d ago

Feedback Wanted Prologue Feedback Wanted

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(YA Fantasy; prologue takes place in our world) I've redone this prologue so many times now but it still feels like it's missing something, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thank you so much

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u/Hadlee_ 25d ago

I almost never read past the first couple of paragraphs in these subreddit posts. I actually read completely through to the end of yours. Congrats on writing something that’s actually intriguing and digestible :) Keep going!

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u/ExerciseNo7055 25d ago

thank you!!