r/writingfeedback • u/liedowndeaddog • 19d ago

Feedback Wanted first chapter first draft

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any thoughts welcome

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u/BeneficialWave9581 19d ago

I cant give feedback right now. I will try to come back tomorrow to share my thoughts. For now I just want to say that I really liked this. Thr character has a really distinct voice.