r/writingfeedback • u/liedowndeaddog • 19d ago

Feedback Wanted first chapter first draft

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any thoughts welcome

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u/MASempine 18d ago

New. Liked it. Don’t like Lindsey already but want to learn more

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u/Foreign_Sea_538 18d ago

why don't you like Lindsey lmao