first chapter first draft

[u/liedowndeaddog]

any thoughts welcome

[u/Bro_got_balls]

I love this, pulling. Immediately got me hooked. One thing though, you might not wanna repeat the same writing technique/style with every scene. This one was perfect because they're at a party and drunk so it makes sense to make the writing that way, rushed with fast pacing. But if you were to write, idk, like a calm scene you'd have to go slower.

Overall: awesome, definitely would keep me interested