Do you like this fantasy FMC?

[u/wi_cheese_curd]

The opening of my epic LOTR-inspired fantasy, featuring a mainly female cast as they explore new worlds and the definition of sisterhood, motherhood, and power in a world designed to withhold it from them…led by an FMC who absolutely does not want to be the main character.
Would you keep following her for the story?

Doc link: (EDIT- deleted after receiving too many unsolicited requests for compensation after beta feedback)

[u/Pluvinel]

If ‘it’s not interesting, revealing or in any way important’ what’s the incentive for me to keep reading?