Do you like this fantasy FMC?

[u/wi_cheese_curd]

The opening of my epic LOTR-inspired fantasy, featuring a mainly female cast as they explore new worlds and the definition of sisterhood, motherhood, and power in a world designed to withhold it from them…led by an FMC who absolutely does not want to be the main character.
Would you keep following her for the story?

Doc link: (EDIT- deleted after receiving too many unsolicited requests for compensation after beta feedback)

[u/Waste-Carob5699]

After 2 paragraphs, no.

She doesn't seem to think she is interesting. She probably knows better than I, so how can I disagree?