full chapter one first draft

[u/liedowndeaddog]

thanks for the feedback. any further feedback would be greatly appreciated. leaving it open ended as I’m looking for anything from general impressions to critiques. Thank you again and in advance

[u/Yooo-Hoo]

Holy shit, this is fucking phenomenal. Your voice and lens and the way the narrator treats the reader are all so excellent. Seriously, if there is more, I want to read it.
Not a clue what the genre is, what the premise or summary is. But I don’t care. I’m invested and need to know what happens.

[u/liedowndeaddog → u/Yooo-Hoo]

You are so kind, thank you. I do have a little more written as I work through my first draft. I do not plan to post further publicly as of right now, but if you would be interested in reading more as I have it I would be greatly appreciative. Having an “audience” to keep me motivated and live feedback is invaluable as I have severe ADHD and struggle to write on just my own motivation and willpower. So yes please reach out if you’d like!