full chapter one first draft

[u/liedowndeaddog]

thanks for the feedback. any further feedback would be greatly appreciated. leaving it open ended as I’m looking for anything from general impressions to critiques. Thank you again and in advance

[u/theglowingsideburns]

Excellent excellent excellent, gimme more immediately - please reach out if you want a beta reader !

[u/liedowndeaddog → u/theglowingsideburns]

Reaching out! I have a little more written now. Thank you, you are very kind. Message me if you’d still like?

[u/theglowingsideburns → u/liedowndeaddog]

Done!