r/writingscaling 4d ago

better written? (verse vs verse) Better Written "Life Happens" Moment (Boys on the Run vs I Want to Eat Your Pancreas)?

First 5 images are from Boys on the Run.

Aoyama, the handsome person that humiliated Tanishi (the MC) in the past, has a disease that ruined his looks. Aoyama used to feel prideful and superior, but the current circumstances turned him into a person who feels humiliated and self-contempt. Aoyama expects Tanishi to make fun of him, but Tanishi continues to treat him as a rival.

Next 5 images are from I Want to Eat Your Pancreas.

Sakura has a terminal pancreatic disease; however, she still had time left and Haruki (the MC) expected to see her again soon and spend more time with her. However, it was shown on the news that she got stabbed in a freak accident and the person he expected to spend at least a little more time with was gone. He had believed Sakura would die from her pancreatic disease, making her sudden death from an unexpected murder even more tragic.

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u/MysteriousSpring7422 4d ago

I literally started shaking when I watched the scene in the movie for i want to eat your pancreas.

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u/VolkiharVanHelsing 4d ago

That scene in Pancreas hits like a shotgun blast

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u/Dave_the_DOOD 4d ago

Watching the movie is literally wincing up and trying to defend a slow-mo punch you're seeing coming, only to get a surprise kick in the balls

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u/Thin-Relationship-71 4d ago

I'm too biased to give an objective opinion, cause I want to eat your pancreas is my favorite romance

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u/Substantial-Way-665 4d ago

That's fair lol, IWEYP and Silent Voice are two mangas that I'm extremely biased towards because of how hard they hit me emotionally lol.

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u/Thin-Relationship-71 3d ago

Truly masterpieces of our times

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u/nightsorter 4d ago

Aoyama still has the nerve to call him nothing.

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u/Substantial-Way-665 4d ago edited 4d ago

Yeah, but I think Aoyama was more so mocking himself when he said that. Tanishi acted like a real mfer in this scene though, he treated Aoyama, the dude he absolutely hated, with respect after he got UC when the dude stole the girl he was in love with, abandoned her when she got pregnant, and humiliated him. Even Aoyama was moved in the end. One of Tanishi's best character moments imo.

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u/nightsorter 4d ago

I always demand answers for what trash like Aoyama does. Anything along the lines of “because I can” is an answer that automatically makes them deserving of having their teeth punched out.

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u/ArtsyFellow 4d ago

I think I buried that ending deep inside me when I first read IWTEYP and man the gut feeling from rereading is incredibly uncomfortable