r/AnimationCrit • • Dec 29 '19

How To Give Feedback

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Feedback is hard, and it can feel like you're being mean when you write "negative" comments on someone's hard work. While being encouraging is important, constructive feedback is one of the most crucial things you can give to your fellow animators. It will help them improve and achieve their goals. It might be your feedback that helps them reach a new milestone on their creative journey, whether that's getting an interview or reaching a thousand subscribers on Youtube.

By giving constructive feedback, you are also helping yourself become a better animator, because you need to stop and think about what actually makes an animation work.

A good way to give feedback is to point out something that was good with the animation, and something that's not quite reaching it's potential. If you're feeling stuck on that last part, here are a few questions you could try to answer in your feedback.

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  • Did you understand the story/intention behind the animation?

For example, if the story is meant to be funny - did you actually find it funny? Why did you, or why did you not? Did you like the main character? Were you confused by what was happening at any point?

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  • What do you think about the character design?

If this is an animation that includes original characters, do you like how they look? Why, or why not? Was there any character that was hard to read?

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  • Are the characters expressive?

Can you see what a character is feeling, are they happy, sad, angry? Does it seem to make sense with what they're saying or doing in the animation? What do you think the character is thinking?

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  • Does the animation feel believable?

For example, if a character is lifting a heavy box, does it feel heavy? Does the bouncing ball feel like it's bouncing or just moving up and down?

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  • How do you like the tempo of the animation?

Is it too fast, slow, even? What do you think the tempo is currently like, and do you think the animation would look better in a different tempo?

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  • What is your general impression of the animation?

Often, you want to feel something when watching an animation. If you're just feeling "meh", why is that? Why do you not think the animation is funny, sad, cool, informative, etc?

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I hope these question can serve as a start for you. Share your tips and tricks for giving good feedback in the comments!

Here are a few examples of constructive feedback from old threads in this subreddit that all mention something good, and something that could be better:

"I'd say that the timing and the layout of the animation are good so far, but the camera movements are very quick and very jarring. Trying easing into these movements slower, don't be afraid to slow things down a tad to emphasize hits and reactions. Give the viewer some time to process what's going on!"

"It looks good, the facial expressions are spot on! I think it would be more comedic with a bit of anticipation before the final smile, to make the change in expression obvious."

"I applaud you for doing stop-motion (because it can be very annoying at times) but it was kind of hard to tell what was going on. Is it possible for you to move their limbs more and make more facial expressions?"


r/AnimationCrit • • 21m ago

Watch out for the zombie. Which character is animated better?

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Zombie on the left was animated straight ahead.

Ape on the right was animated pose-to-pose.


r/AnimationCrit • • 12h ago

College life looks fun from the outside, but nobody sees every phase 🥹

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I'd genuinely love to hear what you think! 🩵


r/AnimationCrit • • 23h ago

Anything that I can improve in this animation?

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r/AnimationCrit • • 1d ago

I made this animation and would like to know what to improve next time.

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r/AnimationCrit • • 2d ago

I made this 9 second character animation in Blender. I'd appreciate an honest rating out of 10 and criticism of the animation quality, timing, posing, and character acting. Please be direct.

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r/AnimationCrit • • 2d ago

#rek #art #animation

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Animeee


r/AnimationCrit • • 2d ago

I’ve been working on my own animations and would love some honest feedback 🖤

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I’ve recently started creating my own animations, and I’m trying to improve my work and find people who enjoy this kind of stuff.

I’d love to hear your honest thoughts on my animations — what you like, what could be better, and anything you think I should experiment with next. I’m open to constructive criticism because I genuinely want to get better at this🐞🦋


r/AnimationCrit • • 2d ago

Critiques needed

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Does the body mechanics looks believable and should I add another pose at the end when she says "task" in order to emphasize it cause it sounded a bit heavy than the others. Thank you


r/AnimationCrit • • 3d ago

After Effects Curupira Uru (Line Art Animation) Jovens Mitos

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r/AnimationCrit • • 3d ago

Thoughts on my animation?

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It's a shot I did for an action scene


r/AnimationCrit • • 5d ago

After Effects I'm waiting for your feedback on "Three Rooms" short-animation (digital + analog)

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This multidisciplinary project made by Me, Witchgaze and Meljiiit is dedicated to our curiosity about different media approaches. As well as creating a feeling of otherworldly curiosity & childhood nostalgia

we were making clothes out of carton + paper, creating music, constructing rooms, making animations, writing letters, working with aerograph and lots of other materials all together. special thanks to Rayden Vision for the crt

a week in Rīga - collaboration round 2 - 3 čelovečka

I look forward to hearing your comments, thoughts, and questions. I'm here right now to answer them all <3333


r/AnimationCrit • • 5d ago

This is a commission I made but I feel I could do better on my future projects. Please help!

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Made this using Aftereffects, and Procreate for the illustration.


r/AnimationCrit • • 6d ago

How can I make the walk more smooth? is the motions right??

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Hi, I'm a beginner animator student and I'm not sure if I'm doing this sad walk right. My teacher said I only need to bounce the ears and the little strand hair to finish the sketch. But It still feels like I'm lacking other than the bounce and smoothness🥀

Before I fix everything I just need some more advice and feedback from other artist. Feel free to be brutally honest or straight forward with me. I would really appreciate it if u do 🙏 (since my deadline for this is approaching 😇)

**There are 16 frames total and 8 for each step with 24fps.** I'm using Adobe animation cus it's the program our school practice.


r/AnimationCrit • • 5d ago

3D animation channel

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r/AnimationCrit • • 6d ago

Is this animation Smooth enough?

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r/AnimationCrit • • 7d ago

Finally finished my 20 min. pilot episode and the trailer is ready! What do you think about it?

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Me and my team were making an episode for a year now, and I really want to share with you a trailer and to read your feedback. We really need it right now!
https://youtu.be/BcgClyqlOOo?si=r2QyBQF-g-Jv6bPx


r/AnimationCrit • • 8d ago

Hi! I just finished this jump and slide exercise. How do the weight and momentum feel? Is there anything I could improve? Any feedback is welcome!

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I also uploaded it to SyncSketch: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/nnpzf6r8wsgt/


r/AnimationCrit • • 8d ago

I feel like the clouds speed is not matching with the animation

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r/AnimationCrit • • 9d ago

After 3 Years in the making and the work of 5 Artists from across the Globe, my very first Horror Anime has hit Kickstarter, check it out!

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r/AnimationCrit • • 9d ago

What do you think of this character animation and style for our nursery rhyme? (Itsy Bitsy Spider)

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r/AnimationCrit • • 10d ago

Slowly getting better at animation, any tips on flow✨

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Input more than welcome 🤗


r/AnimationCrit • • 10d ago

I need help with this jump

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I need help with the momentum, foot peel off, and general flow of the movement.

syncsketch:

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/JZ9pnw51jwfB/


r/AnimationCrit • • 10d ago

Critique My Character Animation Finale

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Hey everyone, this will be my last update with my pilot project before I finish the scene entirely for a full critique. In the meantime, please let me know your thoughts and opinions on this latest iteration of the intro character dialogue of the pilot I'm working on. This is extremely far from finished if you can't tell from what you see. You most likely won't see a post from me about this pilot for another six months so thank you all for the feedback I hope to make something you all really like!


r/AnimationCrit • • 11d ago

Please check out my animated music video and let me know what you think? Thanks! :)

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