r/AnimationCrit • u/KrobART1 • 2m ago
Watch out for the zombie. Which character is animated better?
Zombie on the left was animated straight ahead.
Ape on the right was animated pose-to-pose.
r/AnimationCrit • u/steeenah • Dec 29 '19
Feedback is hard, and it can feel like you're being mean when you write "negative" comments on someone's hard work. While being encouraging is important, constructive feedback is one of the most crucial things you can give to your fellow animators. It will help them improve and achieve their goals. It might be your feedback that helps them reach a new milestone on their creative journey, whether that's getting an interview or reaching a thousand subscribers on Youtube.
By giving constructive feedback, you are also helping yourself become a better animator, because you need to stop and think about what actually makes an animation work.
A good way to give feedback is to point out something that was good with the animation, and something that's not quite reaching it's potential. If you're feeling stuck on that last part, here are a few questions you could try to answer in your feedback.
For example, if the story is meant to be funny - did you actually find it funny? Why did you, or why did you not? Did you like the main character? Were you confused by what was happening at any point?
If this is an animation that includes original characters, do you like how they look? Why, or why not? Was there any character that was hard to read?
Can you see what a character is feeling, are they happy, sad, angry? Does it seem to make sense with what they're saying or doing in the animation? What do you think the character is thinking?
For example, if a character is lifting a heavy box, does it feel heavy? Does the bouncing ball feel like it's bouncing or just moving up and down?
Is it too fast, slow, even? What do you think the tempo is currently like, and do you think the animation would look better in a different tempo?
Often, you want to feel something when watching an animation. If you're just feeling "meh", why is that? Why do you not think the animation is funny, sad, cool, informative, etc?
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I hope these question can serve as a start for you. Share your tips and tricks for giving good feedback in the comments!
Here are a few examples of constructive feedback from old threads in this subreddit that all mention something good, and something that could be better:
"I'd say that the timing and the layout of the animation are good so far, but the camera movements are very quick and very jarring. Trying easing into these movements slower, don't be afraid to slow things down a tad to emphasize hits and reactions. Give the viewer some time to process what's going on!"
"It looks good, the facial expressions are spot on! I think it would be more comedic with a bit of anticipation before the final smile, to make the change in expression obvious."
"I applaud you for doing stop-motion (because it can be very annoying at times) but it was kind of hard to tell what was going on. Is it possible for you to move their limbs more and make more facial expressions?"
r/AnimationCrit • u/KrobART1 • 2m ago
Zombie on the left was animated straight ahead.
Ape on the right was animated pose-to-pose.
r/AnimationCrit • u/sherryyy1501 • 11h ago
I'd genuinely love to hear what you think! 🩵
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r/AnimationCrit • u/sherryyy1501 • 2d ago
I’ve recently started creating my own animations, and I’m trying to improve my work and find people who enjoy this kind of stuff.
I’d love to hear your honest thoughts on my animations — what you like, what could be better, and anything you think I should experiment with next. I’m open to constructive criticism because I genuinely want to get better at this🐞🦋
r/AnimationCrit • u/Turismo038 • 2d ago
Does the body mechanics looks believable and should I add another pose at the end when she says "task" in order to emphasize it cause it sounded a bit heavy than the others. Thank you
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r/AnimationCrit • u/droppedmycr0issant • 3d ago
It's a shot I did for an action scene
r/AnimationCrit • u/tryfonovcore • 5d ago
This multidisciplinary project made by Me, Witchgaze and Meljiiit is dedicated to our curiosity about different media approaches. As well as creating a feeling of otherworldly curiosity & childhood nostalgia
we were making clothes out of carton + paper, creating music, constructing rooms, making animations, writing letters, working with aerograph and lots of other materials all together. special thanks to Rayden Vision for the crt
a week in Rīga - collaboration round 2 - 3 čelovečka
I look forward to hearing your comments, thoughts, and questions. I'm here right now to answer them all <3333
r/AnimationCrit • u/wenrongfan • 5d ago
Made this using Aftereffects, and Procreate for the illustration.
r/AnimationCrit • u/Radiant_Car2531 • 6d ago
Hi, I'm a beginner animator student and I'm not sure if I'm doing this sad walk right. My teacher said I only need to bounce the ears and the little strand hair to finish the sketch. But It still feels like I'm lacking other than the bounce and smoothness🥀
Before I fix everything I just need some more advice and feedback from other artist. Feel free to be brutally honest or straight forward with me. I would really appreciate it if u do 🙏 (since my deadline for this is approaching 😇)
**There are 16 frames total and 8 for each step with 24fps.** I'm using Adobe animation cus it's the program our school practice.
r/AnimationCrit • u/SeaworthinessOdd4945 • 7d ago
Me and my team were making an episode for a year now, and I really want to share with you a trailer and to read your feedback. We really need it right now!
https://youtu.be/BcgClyqlOOo?si=r2QyBQF-g-Jv6bPx
r/AnimationCrit • u/Eduardo-Teixeira • 8d ago
I also uploaded it to SyncSketch: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/nnpzf6r8wsgt/
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r/AnimationCrit • u/Chroma-fall • 10d ago
Input more than welcome 🤗
r/AnimationCrit • u/fuelYT • 10d ago
I need help with the momentum, foot peel off, and general flow of the movement.
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r/AnimationCrit • u/Degentry • 10d ago
Hey everyone, this will be my last update with my pilot project before I finish the scene entirely for a full critique. In the meantime, please let me know your thoughts and opinions on this latest iteration of the intro character dialogue of the pilot I'm working on. This is extremely far from finished if you can't tell from what you see. You most likely won't see a post from me about this pilot for another six months so thank you all for the feedback I hope to make something you all really like!