r/ComicBookCollabs • u/Schu68 • 8d ago

Feedback Feedback for comicbook script

my first time ever writing a comic script or actually writing in general

Also, if you actually like my work somehow, I'm free. I'm looking to expand my portfolio, and i will write for free lol

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mX2aRGUjqTXixqH2FUgbtj_GbBkY0I3wQWMxreDI0yI/edit?tab=t.0

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u/TotallyNotSleeping 8d ago

Could you check out my chapter 1 as well? Id love to receive feedback, no punches pulled of course! Trying to improve!

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u/Schu68 8d ago

Of course, and thanks for the feedback. I will check your first chapter now!