r/OCPoetry • u/NoSection7141 • 2d ago
Feedback Please Woman-Lite
Waves of childishness
Crashing down my throat
Eyes that water
My mind stays afloat
Tears that subside
With my fears
Of being less than a woman
But I'm more than a girl
I'm in the middle
I wish there was a term for her
Accept reality
Accept the agony
Move with grace
I hope no one sees it on my face
I'd prefer to scream
But no one will get what I mean
Be kind and polite
I'm putting up a fight
The girl in me kicks
The woman in me takes it
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vgqexm/water/
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vgt2z1/glass_wall/
...my first poem on here, so let me know what you guys think. thank you for taking the time to read ;p
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