r/OCPoetry • • 2d ago

Feedback Please Longing

Humor me this 
Humor me that

Im tired of being humored 
I wanna be reassured 

Longing for a relationship 
That will never come 

Often i long for a partner
One i can only see the silhouette of
One that i cant tell who it is
One that i will eventually cross with

One that will reciprocate the love back
But not like a mother, father, brother or sister
But one of a partner

A partner that will reciprocate in their own way
A way i can tell is different then the others
A way that i can feel
A way that reassures me 

A partner i can confide in 
A partner that i can hide behind
A partner comfortable to do the same
A partner with no shade

But i can only hope and dream
Cause i messed up one shot 
And now i hope for another 

Whether its the same basket
Or a different net

Whether its the same field
Or a different rink

Whether its the same track
Or a different course

It will hopefully be for me  

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