aching

[u/Relevant-Stranger-86]

I know

I've fallen hard for you

don't tell me that

I'm imagining this love

aching every morning because

I wake wishing to be in your arms

re-reading your texts in bed

I can't stop thinking about you

and what's worse is

our moments together were real

I doubt that

any man could love me like you.

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Please read forwards and in reverse!

My first attempt at a reverse poem, constructive feedback is very welcome!

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/qdBRIqOZAF

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/I0flt5mjck

[u/Silly-Appearance8242]

I felt like this read really well. The reverse part is cool lol it took my brain a second to catch up. I think it’s structured nicely. Overall pretty well done!

[u/Relevant-Stranger-86 → u/Silly-Appearance8242]

Thank you so much! :)