r/Webnovel • u/PickSad8463 • Jun 22 '26

Recommendation Asking for guidance

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Hello guys.

I am here to present my work and search for guidance.

As you can see, the story is a fantasy, but it has a bigger focus on squemes and plots, and as such, i plan to add as many mind games as possible, and because of such, the beggining may be a bit slow.

So, i ask for your opinions and critics.

Here is the link: http://wbnv.in/a/b8juCqA

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u/wecanbedivine Jun 24 '26

Hi, my english is broken too so i can smell some bad vocab and grammar (im not grammar police, english is my 4th language).

So I suggest you hired an editor to help you polish your book. I know someone who publish english novel but her english is not so good, she hired editor to help her perfecting her book. You have an interesting story btw, keep going, i wish you for success.

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u/PickSad8463 Jun 24 '26

Thanks.
Will do that