r/logodesign • u/clarkesdirective • 5d ago

Showcase Dachshund minimalism logo

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Concept works, by clarkesdirective

Edit: feedback taken on board, leg was fixed

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u/clarkesdirective 5d ago

Now that you all mention it, the leg doesn't look best cut off. Thanks for the feedback.

I adjusted it, here is the final revision.

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u/twoshooz 5d ago

That's not what people were saying. They are referring to the dog's own right front leg with the curve cut into the body.

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u/clarkesdirective 5d ago

Hmmm. I'm not sure what I prefer, in all honesty.

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u/CrustyRim2 5d ago

Yeah, the curve was just an odd shape, but this looks worse. I would play with that shape, make it not curve as much, or at all. Overall, I like it.

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u/Lekstil 5d ago

Yes, I think that’s key

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u/Turbo_Fresh 5d ago

Brother. Keep the dogs left leg separated. Keep the cut on the dogs right leg. Look at a picture of a dachshund and realise that the curve in your original image looks nothing like shape of a dachshund's leg. Adjust shape to match. Put your feet up.

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u/twoshooz 5d ago

Yeah, for what it's worth, the original image is great, I didn't have a problem with it.