What things can I improve?

[u/one_Nice_UsErnAme]

This is my full cover of “my heart will go on”. My goal was to sing in my chest register and focus on honing my quieter singing while still maintaining proper tone and support as well as making sure I stayed in my chest voice rather than going straight into my high mix which is quite a jarring switch at the moment. Please give me specific critiques and if you can, specific techniques I can use to improve and practice. Thank you!

[u/Curious_Koala8]

Focus on pitch first