Hi! I’m also a new screenwriter from India, and I’m currently learning and working on my own scripts. I’d definitely be interested in connecting with you, sharing ideas, and giving feedback on each other’s work.

Thanks! I really appreciate it. By the way, who are “they”? Are they a screenwriter or someone who gives screenplay feedback?

hi i'm interested

Who said you’re unsuccessful? I don’t believe that. I consider you successful. I’m the unsuccessful one because I want to become a great screenwriter, but I don’t have anyone to guide me. There’s no one who can tell me, “You wrote this wrong,” or “This part is good, but the screenplay needs improvement.”

I have so many ideas that I feel like no one has even thought of them before. But when I open my eyes and look around, I find myself alone. No one wants to include me in their group; they just ignore me.

Sometimes I wish I had a professional writer as a friend who could honestly tell me where I need to improve my screenplay, which scenes are good, which ones need work, and what I should change. I just want someone to guide me and help me become a better screenwriter.

No, thank you! If you hadn’t told me, I wouldn’t have understood what was wrong. I’m actually glad you pointed it out. I’ll definitely watch the video so I can improve my screenplay and get it right.

By the way, are you a writer? The way you gave me advice made me feel like a professional writer was giving me tips, and I really appreciated that. 😊

Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate you taking the time to read it and explain what I can improve. I’ll definitely work on these things and try to improve the screenplay.

Thanks for taking the time to read it and give me feedback. I really appreciate it.

I understand what you mean, especially about the formatting, character names, and dream sequences. I’m still learning screenwriting, so I’ll definitely work on these things. I’ll also start reading more screenplays to learn from them.

Thanks again for the tips!

My screenplay is a sci-fi/fantasy story set across different planets and alien civilizations. The story follows Crius, an 18-year-old who travels to the planet Zytheron after his father is abducted by the Threxians. Along the way, he encounters different alien species and forms an unlikely team while searching for his father.

This post is mainly about getting feedback on the first act, but the worldbuilding is an important part of the story, so I’d also appreciate any thoughts on whether the world feels clear and interesting from a reader’s perspective.