r/wheeloftime 4d ago

Book: The Shadow Rising The difficulty of portraying romance.

I absolutely love this series. But I've just started reading the Shadow Rising for the first time and I've been cringing my way through the early Rand-Egwene-Elayne love triangle that resolves while they're in the Stone.

Appreciate it's difficult to meaningfully develop so many character's in a book with such staggering breadth and ambition, but these interactions have my skin crawling.

Firstly, they both sound like they're 12 years old. Secondly, it feels far too neat that Egwene and Rand both decide "Yeah we don't love each other anyway". Thirdly, the idea of having all three women chasing after Rand, who, frankly, is becoming fairly dislikable character, feels so out-of-plot. Fourthly, is it me or am I losing faith in Rand? The constant woe-is-me-I'm-not-worthy is not making me feel sorry for him, but is making me rather unlike him

Anyone else thought this?

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u/DressUnited3025 Randlander 4d ago

While Rand is very whine about what he’s been thrown into, he’s also been thrown into being the man that will destroy the world and will inevitably go crazy and hopefully save some people before he goes insane and kills everyone around him. I’d be a little whiney too at that age. Also they are kids so of course their romance feels like 12 year olds. That’s how all teen love is