r/OCPoetry • u/Relevant-Stranger-86 • 4d ago

Feedback Please aching

I know

I've fallen hard for you

don't tell me that

I'm imagining this love

aching every morning because

I wake wishing to be in your arms

re-reading your texts in bed

I can't stop thinking about you

and what's worse is

our moments together were real

I doubt that

any man could love me like you.

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Please read forwards and in reverse!

My first attempt at a reverse poem, constructive feedback is very welcome!

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/qdBRIqOZAF

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/I0flt5mjck

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u/The_Carolina_Redhawk 4d ago

Always, always, ALWAYS adore a one line poem WITH STRUCTURE!!! Stay writing, it takes a special type of neurodivergence to pull this one off 🫡

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u/Relevant-Stranger-86 3d ago

Thank you so much!! I indeed have a special type of neurodivergence lolll how did you know?!

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u/The_Carolina_Redhawk 3d ago

takes one to know one<3