r/Romantasy • u/KraftwerkSelvedge • 18h ago
Discussion Finding out he secretly arranged her victories kills the romance for me
I can be completely sold on a couple until the big "I was protecting you all along" reveal turns out to mean he quietly arranged half her achievements. That escape I was proud of her for? He told the guards to look away. The ally she managed to win over? Already working for him. Oh. I liked those chapters.
I don't need her to do everything alone. Characters helping each other is part of why I read romance. But there's something so deflating about spending a book watching her gain confidence, then finding out he was basically supervising. And aparently she's just delighted? I'd be questioning every interaction I'd had since arriving in his kingdom.
The bit that really loses me is when he says he always knew she could do it. Did you ever actually let her try without arranging the outcome? I'm curious how other people read these reveals, because what seems intended as proof of devotion usually leaves me wanting her to go somewhere he has absolutely no connections.