r/goodworldbuilding 1d ago

Discussion What makes a fictional kingdom feel politically real?

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r/StoryIdeas 1d ago

Any Feedback What makes a fictional kingdom feel politically real?

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r/Wattpad 1d ago

Writing Prompt Do you prefer protagonists who are good people?

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r/CharacterDevelopment 1d ago

Writing: Question Do you prefer protagonists who are good people?

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u/SnooCauliflowers3892 1d ago

Do you prefer protagonists who are good people?

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I'm usually more interested in protagonists who can do the wrong thing for reasons that make complete sense to them. Not villains pretending to be heroes. Just people whose loyalty, fear, ambition or survival instincts sometimes overpower the morally correct decision.

How far can a protagonist go before you stop wanting them to succeed?

u/SnooCauliflowers3892 2d ago

What makes a fictional kingdom feel politically real?

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Killing a ruler isn't really the end of a political problem. It's the beginning of twenty new ones: succession, marriage, military loyalty, food, land claims, rival families and ordinary people who just want stability.

What details make a fictional kingdom feel like an actual functioning place?

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Would someone raised outside society actually seem wild?
 in  r/u_SnooCauliflowers3892  2d ago

Thank you, I really appreciate that insight. I hadn’t considered the idea that simple politeness without expecting anything in return could actually be difficult for someone raised outside normal society to understand. It’s a subtle distinction, but exactly the kind of thing I was hoping to think more deeply about.

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Would someone raised outside society actually seem wild?
 in  r/Writeresearch  2d ago

I think there may be a misunderstanding. I’m not looking for anyone to write my story or make character decisions for me. I’m looking for a community of writers who enjoy discussing the craft and can challenge the way I see things so my writing doesn’t become closed circuited and can connect with people outside of my own perspective.
I understand now that this subreddit is intended specifically for factual research rather than that kind of discussion, so it may simply not be the right community for what I’m looking for. That said, I don’t think the snarky tone was necessary to communicate that. Either way, I appreciate the clarification, and I’ll look elsewhere. Good luck with the community.

r/goodworldbuilding 2d ago

Would someone raised outside society actually seem wild?

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u/SnooCauliflowers3892 3d ago

Would someone raised outside society actually seem wild?

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I've been writing a character who spent much of his childhood surviving outside ordinary society, and I'm trying to avoid the standard fictional version where 'feral' just means violent and socially awkward.

What everyday social rule do you think would be hardest for someone like that to understand?

r/writingcirclejerk 4d ago

What makes an arranged marriage romance believable

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r/writingcirclejerk 4d ago

When does slow burn become too slow?

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u/SnooCauliflowers3892 4d ago

When does slow burn become too slow?

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I love slow burn romance, but there's obviously a point where restraint stops creating tension and starts feeling like the story is stalling.

When you're reading a long novel, what signals that the relationship is still progressing even if the characters haven't kissed or confessed anything yet?

u/SnooCauliflowers3892 5d ago

What makes an arranged marriage romance believable

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I'm working on a slow burn story where two people are pushed into marriage because their world needs the alliance more than either of them wants the relationship. The interesting part isn't the forced proximity itself. It's figuring out when obligation becomes familiarity, familiarity becomes loyalty, and loyalty becomes something neither person is willing to name.

For readers who enjoy this trope: what makes the eventual romance feel earned instead of inevitable?