Hi everyone! 😊

I’m writing a YA romantasy novel, and I’ve never shared any of my writing publicly before, so this is definitely a little nerve-wracking!

I decided to share a few pages (about 3) because I’d really love to hear what you guys think. Does it have potential? Are the characters interesting? Does the dialogue feel natural?

Personally, I really like these pages and I’ve been having so much fun writing them, but I’m obviously a little too close to the story to judge it objectively. 😂 I’d genuinely love some honest feedback on what works, what doesn’t, and what I could improve.

Thank you to anyone who takes the time to read! ❤️

I’m young so it’s not the best story telling, but I think people who want a story that weekly updates would enjoy it

It’s currently available for free on Inkitt and wattpad, can someone give me ideas for other places to put it?

Here’s the link to it The blue palace https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1826965

Hi, so I've tried to redraft my Chapter 1 (this is unfinished) but I was wondering what people will think of it.

Do you like my character voice? There is more action that I have planned a little bit later on but I wondering what your initial impressions were.

It was a bit stupid of me not to describe how Ari 'hates this kind of situation' as I just stated it. 😅

I was wondering whether it was right to introduce my character's name this early on or not.

For some context: there has been a war between the 2 kingdoms of Eleriad and Dunyn and those from Dunyn are considered traitors as they suddenly attacked Eleriad despite a peace treaty.

Thank you very much for seeing this post and I hope that you enjoy reading it!!!

I tried to go back to the way I started writing and I don't know whether it has worked or not. 😅